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squirrelstars · Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 3:23 pm

hey guys. heres my guy, yet again. this time a slightly tighter drawing but still in sketch state.
spanks in advance for any crits or comments.

and this one is from my previous post, just in case someone cares for that type of nonsense.
-peace

[ October 28, 2001: Message edited by: squirrelstars ]

squirrelstars · Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 6:33 pm

sniff.. all alone

CluelessMorgan · Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 6:37 pm

that is cool! I likes.

I am no where near your standard but something that I did notice is that nose on the second seems a little flat, maybe cause of the shading.

I like how the shading is done.

Keep it up!

edible snowman · member Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998

he has really short legs.

squirrelstars · Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 8:25 pm

yeah. thanks.. it's not so much that the legs are short ( i think he is roughly 7 1/2 heads tall) as much as the HANDS are huge.. i will have to fix fix when i plot out my storyboards...

heck probably legs are too damn short. giving it a second looksee

..nose too flat you say? could be.. but i dont think that i am gonna work on that second drawing much more, its just a reference sketch.

[ October 28, 2001: Message edited by: squirrelstars ]

Marvel · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 7:23 am

Well, imo he also has very short legs - also 7� heads tall is quite short - he must be like 5'5" or something. If you ask me, I'd make the hands slightly smaller, the legs longer and the head shorter.

Like this:

[ October 29, 2001: Message edited by: Marvel ]

squirrelstars · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 11:48 am

hey thanks alot, marvel. that does look much better. i will refine, i will refine.

much bowing and gratitude
-peace