Sijun Forums :: View topic - Action Girl in sewer!! Part 3!! (a splash of colour)

Shiro_tengu · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 10:27 pm

Hi,
I have been playing with colour. Anyone want to give me some feedback?

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Shiro_tengu · Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 10:48 pm

There is an earlier post of her in pencil

here

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dARCKLOWN · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:31 am

very cool man exellent colour good improvement from the pencil version

lildragon · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 2:22 am

The water is very well done, and the light source on her inner thighs and such works nicely, but the rest of the colors doesn't work with the realistic look of the enviroment.... she looks a lil pastel against a realistic enviroment, it really stands out... keep going tho it's really coming along

Vgta · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 1:00 pm

Definitely a big improvement.
I do agree the top part of the girl still needs more work, also you might want to add some grit and detail to the background to make it more realistic. Later on so that it doesn't stand out too much you can add some blur effect to the background to give it that Rack Focus effect.
How did you do the water btw?

Hyperi0n · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 7:22 pm

water looks a little wierd

other than that its all goooooood.

Highfive · Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 11:34 pm

I think the water looks pretty good. Just make sure the blue lighting the girl is getting from it falls on the walls of the sewer beind her, too.

Shiro_tengu · Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2001 7:03 pm

Thankyou, all of you. You have been a great help. I will be taking all your advise on board and continue.

This is what I had mucked about with until I read your messages, however, after some verbal advise, I am thinking of recolouring her and having her caught in a spotlight, her shadow projected onto the wall. Its sounds a little campy but I think it will work.

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