[Shiro_tengu]

Hi, I kinda doodled a bit more on the sketch with pencil. I think I am ready to do a colour version. Any more comments before I continue? Anyone want to do an ink version or colour version themselves? Visual miriad did a great one earlier. I would love to see what you guys would do with her if you would like. Or just give me any feedback you would like. :> )

[robust]

I don't consider myself to be as good as you in any way :/ but one thing that i noticed is that her hips is rather large , if you look at the rest of her ..

[NullTygre]

Her calves are way too wide. And so are her thighs.

[visual myriad]

Here 'tis...

[Shiro_tengu]

Robust and NullTygre, thanks for the feedback. I hope her legs won't look too large once the image is painted. She will be wearing long combat fatigues which will be bloused where they meet her boots.

Robust - I don't consider myself better then you at all. I value your feedback, thankyou.

[Sean McIver]

Would this suit a manga look? I think that a b/w type manga-ey style would really work well... I dunno. Looks v. good as is, can't wait 2 see final version...

[Highfive]

I reckon you should add more detail to the fatigues if they're drawing everyone's focus. The rip on the right leg is a good start (looks like she's searching the water for the creature that did it so she can red-mist it). Add some other rips on the bottom perhaps and include loads of cloth wrinkles around the waist, knees and ankles. Make the wrinkles wide since fatigues are such a thick material.
I can post a quick example if necessary

[Monkey Majick]

Have you rendered up a color picture of this pic? I think colour will help make it evident that she has pants on.