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Rob McLay junior member
Member # Joined: 07 Jun 2001 Posts: 30 Location: San Francisco
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 3:35 pm |
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I can't seem to figure out what is wrong with this pic. It's my first try at a realistic looking female character, and I just don't seem to want to finish it. Tips? |
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Dryfire member
Member # Joined: 21 May 2000 Posts: 945 Location: Long Island, NY
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 4:06 pm |
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pretty cool man. It seems to be a bit skewed though.. the hips are out of proportion, and well.. one is a lot bigger than the other. Also her arms are really really skinny. Of course this might be the kind of style your working.. but you mentioned you were going for realistic so I thought i'd lend a hand ;-) Good job |
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Bibbe member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2001 Posts: 61 Location: �rebro - sweden
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Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 4:15 am |
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I think the hips are fine ...
Leaning like that.
But her arms looks strange. She gor really wide shoulders if they connect to them underneath there somewhere but very thin arms.
- B |
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Basement bound member
Member # Joined: 11 Mar 2001 Posts: 874 Location: Calgary.ab.ca
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Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 10:43 am |
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Perhaps it is because the staff that she is leaning on has no solidity and seems very light. Extend the image so you can ground the staff. Also show some of the staff above her could create a concreateness.
JA |
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Probotech member
Member # Joined: 25 May 2001 Posts: 149 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 8:42 am |
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What i think i sworng is that her pose and her way of dressing and the hairstyle screams "young", like she is a teenager but her face is that of an mature woman. Thats what's bothering me. |
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squirrelstars junior member
Member # Joined: 21 Oct 2001 Posts: 38 Location: new yok city of terror
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 3:42 pm |
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hey i like your colors. and dont mind the hips so much, but it bothers me that she looks a bit Lara Croft-ish.
-peace |
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