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Rob McLay
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 3:35 pm     Reply with quote

I can't seem to figure out what is wrong with this pic. It's my first try at a realistic looking female character, and I just don't seem to want to finish it. Tips?
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Dryfire
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Joined: 21 May 2000
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Location: Long Island, NY

PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 4:06 pm     Reply with quote
pretty cool man. It seems to be a bit skewed though.. the hips are out of proportion, and well.. one is a lot bigger than the other. Also her arms are really really skinny. Of course this might be the kind of style your working.. but you mentioned you were going for realistic so I thought i'd lend a hand ;-) Good job
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Bibbe
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Joined: 17 Feb 2001
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Location: �rebro - sweden

PostPosted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 4:15 am     Reply with quote
I think the hips are fine ...
Leaning like that.

But her arms looks strange. She gor really wide shoulders if they connect to them underneath there somewhere but very thin arms.

- B
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Basement bound
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Joined: 11 Mar 2001
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 10:43 am     Reply with quote
Perhaps it is because the staff that she is leaning on has no solidity and seems very light. Extend the image so you can ground the staff. Also show some of the staff above her could create a concreateness.

JA
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Probotech
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 8:42 am     Reply with quote
What i think i sworng is that her pose and her way of dressing and the hairstyle screams "young", like she is a teenager but her face is that of an mature woman. Thats what's bothering me.
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squirrelstars
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 3:42 pm     Reply with quote
hey i like your colors. and dont mind the hips so much, but it bothers me that she looks a bit Lara Croft-ish.
-peace
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