[roundeye]

any help would be greatly apreciated.

[Shiro_tengu]

You do great sketches. I like this one very much. Only point I would draw your eye to is that he may need a little more upper thigh and backside at it appears a little small. I understand that its the style so the change I propose is only subtle.

[Golongria]

Wow, this is extremely clean in the design, I love it. The design for the shoes is incredible as well. My only critique is that his body posture seems rather static if he is jumping in the air, it seems unnatural. If he was more hunched forward it would appear more realistic. It's great work either way.
-Matt

[Icannon]

wicked. very defined form. i love the cast shadows around his arm pit and bicep. i also agree with the other 2 comments. looking forward to seeing this one completed :]

[Akukage]

nice shading, the design kinda reminds me of Jin from the Tekken games

[Dryfire]

Hey roundeye!
Doing a great job, this new peice is awesome! Fantastic hair style and shadowing, its really looks three dimensional! Hmm his left thigh seems a bit distorted though, it comes above his waist at too sharp of an angle.. kinda like its popped out of its socket. Maybe if you lower it a bit or widen his waste, it will be fixed. Doing great man!

[Petra Pan]

Love your work roundeye.
This one is full of the great heart you always put into your sketches.

One thing though.

The dude seem to lack som ass :-)

Petra Pan

[KOryH]

Master Roundeye!
Once again I love your skills! The only thing I could suggest, and I think this has been an issue with some of your other drawings as well, is you should concentrate on making your silhouettes as clean as the rest of your work. Other than that, I envy your abilities greatly.
Keep kickin' ass,

[roundeye]

hey thanx for the help guys! just pluggin away. ah yes, an ass eh? haha maybe ill beef it up. still needs help but i think i fixed the proportions a little. not sure what im doin with the hand yet. is it lookin better?

edit: sory koryH, i dont understand what you mean.



[ October 16, 2001: Message edited by: roundeye ]

[roundeye]

dude youre so right. im blind today. better?

[Lukiaz]

Looken good Mr 'Round is my eye'...

As per this is a most spendid drawing, I do enjoy it ever so much!.

Perhaps his arm is a little long, if it were to drop, where would it be in relation to his thigh..?. This I ask.
I wouldn't change it personally but you asked!!.
His other arm is maybe a wee thin even though its farther back. Again a wouldn't necassarily change it....no-one else has noticed so either its not very noticable or I'm nuts. The later quite probable.

Cherio!

PS I wait with baited breath for the final!.

*skips off into the grassy meadows*

[Spartan]

You should put his hands back how they were and put a rifle in it, otherwise his whole posture makes no sense. the sphere on the shin is at an improper angle compared to the foot and toe, and the face could use a tad bit of work.

nice overall

And I had to stop coloring your other pic, time constraints. Wonderful pencils to work over though.

[MoleculeMan]

this is prolly a minor point, but on the shin guards for the dude, on the left leg, the leg is a side view, with that round cylinder going straight out, but on his right leg, the cylinder is point straight at the viewer, like the leg is facing us, but the legs view seems to be closer to some where half way in between the two.

Jake

[roundeye]

thanx lukias! i know, i know. theres tonnes wrong. my patience is wearing rather thin as of late.
Spartan, what pic did you start colouring. id love to see it anyways. are you saying the round part on the shin is still fucked, even in the latest version?? or were you lookin at the one above. rifles are for pussies anyways. perhaps a pointed stick would suffice.

[Briareos]

very nice, in the last revision, it looks like his fist/finger is getting lost in his shirt, perhaps re add highlight to it?

[MoleculeMan]

The leg looks much better ! Whatare you using to make this image? Is it computer generated at all, or all pencil or what? hehe i ma dying to know.

[roundeye]

its all PS6 paintbrush and airbrush... ill be posting the final in the finished section shortly. thanx for all your help.

[Darkglade]

Wonderful technique, great painting as usual, but the only thing I can notice is that the thighs seem exactly the same size, maybe its just me but I'd make the leg furthest away a little smaller for perspective, but thats just being picky!

Wonderful,

-Darkglade

[hovair]

I like your loose, highly stylized sketch-work very much. I think your sketch looked great the first time. I would have only changed it if it would have made a substantial difference. I'm kinda bored with realizm so I actually appreciate all those little imperfections ... makes him more interesting. I would take the crits more as mental notes or maybe others who want to achieve more realistic results can benifit from them. I'd hate to see your style lose some impact due to trying to make it look too realistic... so stay loose. If I was at your level of drawing( which i'm not,I'm beneath you) I'd concentrate more on doing more interesting action poses. I say this only because you seem to have everything else down packed as far as I know. maybe if you do like what Golangria said and make him leaning forward like he's putting his weight forward and maybe you could make his chin pushing forward too...I don't know. anyways your works is "Da Bomb"... some of the most appealing and inspiring on this forum in my opinion(I'm new here) and your work is sort of the style I am after. can't wait to see this one finished. are you gonna color it or just keep it b&w?

[Dryfire]

Awesome man, your kicking up some ass now!

[roundeye]

I PUT IT UP IN THE FINISHED GALLERY! CHECK IT OUT! hehe
thanx for all the help, yeah hovair, i cant do action poses to save my life. but im trying and each time they get a tiny bit more dynamic.

[Bizarde]

maybe if you'll lean his torso a bit ?!

~bizarde