[Blueyourmind]

This seem unfinish to me, and I don't like the line work of the pic, any advice?[URL=http://www.geocities.com/michael_lh_lam/song_princess.txt ]web page[/URL]

[Rag]

hey blue, did you mean to link to a txt file?

[Vesuvius]

[Icannon]

this is really nice so far. like the face and the transparent gown thing. her left hand is a little deformed .. thick thumb and i think the fingers are starting a little too high up on the hand. right hand is nice, but maybe a tad small. her feet were the first oddity i noticed .. the way the toes bend and their small size in general. it doesnt seem like they're actually supporting her. last but not least, i've never seen clothing conform to a boob like that. it really jumps out at you and looks too unnatural. but very nice picture in general.

[Anthony J]

Hey Blueyourmind!
I will take this image, and work with it somehow. Maybe I can produce what I was trying to explain to you.

Thanks for letting me look at all the Japense art books!! man those guys are amazing!

anyways, take care...i gotta do homework !