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Zekie
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 11:05 pm     Reply with quote
based on a girl I know.. I hope it came out aiites..

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Matt Elder
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 11:56 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice and stylised. I like the full shot of the dress. the top characters right hand cheek seems to be a little bit too defined and I don't think the left eye is really clear. There appears to be a swirl of lines that could be better if simplified.
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ArMaDoN
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 2:45 am     Reply with quote
very nice work Zekie,
you have very confident lines. the style is nice.. i like your approach.

- Like Matt said the cheek seems to be a little off on the top woman's face.

- on the same pic. look at how you have put the right ear high up and the left soo low. try and adjust that remember proportions. it's always good too look at real life. did u do that on purpose or did u forget.?

nicely done and go on your work is nice
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edible snowman
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 3:42 pm     Reply with quote
i know its stylized but the legs seem kinda long to me
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gekitsu
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2001 2:24 pm     Reply with quote
long legs aren't really bad, are they?
take a look at elena from street fighter 3: double impact or third strike, then you know long legs =)

i like the overall look of it. it's not too specialized in the features but still recognizeable.
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ArtKeo
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 1:25 am     Reply with quote
Elena probably has problems driving a car though.How would those legs fit in the car under the stearing wheel?


I like the way you drew the eyes of the girl,Zekie.
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