[BASTION]

I havn't posted here before so I'd like to say hello and offer something to the board.

This is a character sketch I have been working on, he's supposed to be a hitman with shape-changing ability (into a lion). The character is for the game shadowrun if anyone knows it.



Anyway let me know what you think?

[ October 08, 2001: Message edited by: BASTION ]

[Matt Elder]

G'day Dude, well here is another aussie newbie, welcome aboard. The sketch is coming along quite nicely and the hair, feet and ears certainly suggest the lion idea. One of the things that jumps out at me is the characters right shoulder. It seems a bit flat and looks someone wrong. I think part of this is that the line from the bicep into the chest is too high and creates a 'squarer' chest muscle. The chest muscle should flow/curve nicely over the bicep. Hopefully this made sense.

[Incubus]

Hey! First thing I thought, when I saw this picture was: "Cool, Shodwrun!!!"
It really looks like the style of drawings in the sourcebooks (much better than some pics in there! )
Detail,pose and proportions are great! The only crit I have is about the wrinkles on the lower end of his jacket. They look a bit too straight to me, but maybe its just me...

Great work!!!

[BASTION]

Hey thanks for the feedback and the welcome, it's good to be here.

Matt Elder - Yeah thanks for pointing that out, the under sketch had a curve there but when I did the clothing I think I got the wrinkles a bit wrong in that area giving his bicep that square look. Thanks for pointing that out

Incubus - I think the straight wrinkles look ok there as he is really cruncking his abs leaning forward, but thanks for taking the time to comment.