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Relentless Machine
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2001 9:42 am     Reply with quote
Hello everyone,

I have been a fan of the forum for quite a while and finally got the nerve to post something This a soldier guy a did a while ago. All crits welcome.

Ian

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The_Anarchist
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2001 10:15 am     Reply with quote
Very nice line work. The DE's look nice too.
But left shoulder looks like it's seriously dislocated. The collar bone extends almost down to the edge of your shoulder. It doesn't stop short like you show it.
Other than that it's a very nice Pic

[ October 08, 2001: Message edited by: The_Anarchist ]
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2001 10:27 am     Reply with quote
Obviously some things like proportions on the hands are wrong, but i'm guessing you are going (and hit right on) for the comic style... nice
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2001 1:36 pm     Reply with quote
oooh awesome, color color!
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2001 1:39 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the feedback! I realize that there is some anatomy issues there and I am working them out. I am trying to work out a more stylized "comic" look. Thanks again for the feedback and I am going to post more soon

Ian
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2001 8:54 pm     Reply with quote
You need BIG hands if you're going to go Guns-akimbo with two DEs!

The line work's sweet. All I can pick on it is that he could do with a little more muscle mass in the shoulder joints.
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