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smaddl
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Matt Elder
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 Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 7:37 am |
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first up, I couldn't see any of the *.jpg files, only the *.html one.
That aside, I really like the style that you have going here. The colours / saturation works well. Kinda difficult to crit. The style could be a little more polished and you could add in a few more key shadows but otherwise, looks good. |
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Denim Atrisun
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| Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 7:49 am |
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Being helpful, I mirrored the 3 paintings. If you have any objection to this, just let me know. 
Painting 1
Painting 2
Painting 3
I like #3 a lot! 
[ October 02, 2001: Message edited by: Denim Atrisun ] |
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smaddl
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| Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 9:22 am |
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thank u matt and denim for your replies.
i made an html page for the images could'nt be shown and figured u'v mirrored them. thank's a lot .
i'm going now to a tour in this unbelivable place. so many talented and art passinate peaple. again,like to hear any coment.sugestions. |
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FireFry
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| Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 12:42 pm |
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| I like #3 the most myself. All of them are interesting to me mainly because they are different from the other works I've seen lately. Welcome to the boards. |
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Briareos
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| Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 2:45 pm |
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| Nice, perhaps expand your palette a little... |
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