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PsychoticPenguin
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 Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 1:37 pm |
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Tried to capture some strong emotions in this piece. Any suggestions for improvement?
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Anthony
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| Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 6:12 pm |
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| Hrmm, I dunno, it's gonna be hard to have emotional impact in a photo comp of a naked woman and not much else. Try to think it through a bit more. Are you obsessed about a certain person? If so, what kinds of things would you put in your montage? What kinds of personal things does an obsessed person try to find out? Would he really have a naked picture of the person he was obsessed about? Or would he more likely have a closeup face shot, badly cropped, that he snapped outside her office or something? Things like that give emotion to an image, because they're born of real emotion. Sex drive doesn't count. :] |
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 11:45 pm |
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Anthony has some great provocative questions 
You also need to refine some edges of the photo .. at first it looked like it was part of the whole thing, but then i looked closer and realized it was taped on.
And second of all....if the girl didn't love him, where'd he get that shot from? |
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