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N8X
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 2:31 am     Reply with quote
any ideas?
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 8:36 am     Reply with quote
"Alas, poor Yorick, I chewed him well."

That's coming along quite nicely. I like the monochromatic color and the exotic little pet thing on the left. The fingers holding the baby do seem to be longer than the fingers on the right hand.

-Pat
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 8:54 am     Reply with quote
Spooky!
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melted petal
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 10:34 am     Reply with quote
i love it. my only thoughts are on composition. though the white of the window in the upper left starts to balance out the dark in the lower right with the figures I dont htink its enough. I assume there will be more there once you get done.

Overall looks great though.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 12:22 am     Reply with quote
Babies...the other other white meat

I really like it. Very moody and scary.
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N8X
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 2:54 am     Reply with quote
thx people, i appreciate the comments and suggestions, they help a great deal. But i still have a alot of work to do.

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Guy
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 4:21 pm     Reply with quote
i want that chair!!! i really like the feel of this painting. very nice. i like the monochromatic colour scheme too. i cant think of anyhting else to crit on it. cant wait to see the final pic.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 6:51 pm     Reply with quote
I'm really diggin' this. Like the composition, colors, theme , my only complaint: his cheekbone (the one farthest away from us) seems a bit big in comparison to the other side of his face...other than that...Great Job!
-Matt
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Mordecai
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 10:28 pm     Reply with quote
hehe...thats pretty bad ass...hope you refine it more...look forward to it in the finished section
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 10:39 pm     Reply with quote
did a little after work today, gonna start overtime soon so my free time will be short.

anyway here is an update..



still gonna clean up the little ones and add texture and stuff to the floor and walls..maybe a nice plant.
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