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Greggy
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 Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 3:10 am |
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Hey i found this forum through TJ Frames site, and this will be my first post here.
I'm currently 16 and hope to develop my drawing skills some more, so after viewing TJ's site i started doing some sketches which lead to this soldier drawing, and i thought it would be a good idea to get some criticisum of it:-
Personally i think i should work on the face for the next try beacasue it looks to...erm cartoony? Anyways could anyone give me any advice on what to improve on or any techniques that might be useful?
btw. any books on the subject that u recomend i should own? |
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Melo
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| Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 2:41 pm |
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| i dont have much to say but i dont understand whats on his chest? |
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Dryfire
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| Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 3:19 pm |
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yeah basic anatomy on the face is wrong... you can use a referance or something next time... the whole face kinda looks distorted... as the chest...
i'm guessing theres some symbolising in there.. but you shoudl make it clearer |
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n8
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| Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 10:55 pm |
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| yeah...proportions of the face are abit off..but thats easily fixed with references and such...nice shading u got there though |
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