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KroM
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Joined: 06 Jan 2001
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Location: Seattle, WA, USA
PostPosted: Sat Jul 21, 2001 11:54 pm     Reply with quote
This is the latest thing I've been working on. Don't know if I'll finish it or not. Tell me what you think of it, crits, comments, etc.

As for the subject matter... what can I say, I work at the beach.



[ July 22, 2001: Message edited by: KroM ]
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Dildomatron
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Location: Albuquerque, NM
PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 12:53 am     Reply with quote
Nice one, I have only one suggestion, touch up the lower face, you know the jaw and whatnot. The lips need work as well.
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gekitsu
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 5:07 am     Reply with quote
nice one.
the only thing that looks "wrong" is the length of her lower arm in comparison to her upper arm.
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Luke_de_Sade
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 7:05 am     Reply with quote
Looks good. The only problems I have with it is the lenght of her right arm. It seems too long. Also, her lower belly seems a bit off.

Just my two cents.

Luke.
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Seraphire
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 3:50 pm     Reply with quote
Her torso isn't turning correctly.
Work on her ads, and bikini bottom area.

Very nice techinque.
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J Bradford
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 4:21 pm     Reply with quote
Wow nice contrast. Please finish! Or atleast the hair.
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digismack
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 2:08 am     Reply with quote
first off this is a very nice idea, and so far has been executed great.. the only things I see are that her right side *our left side* hip is extended too far, and I'd love to see more detail put into the hair...
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