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M. J. Iverson
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 Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 4:45 pm |
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Anybody like airplanes? Here's my first try at this sort of thing... started in illustrator and am finishing in photoshop. Thanks for any comments!
[ July 22, 2001: Message edited by: M. J. Iverson ] |
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gekitsu
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| Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 12:20 am |
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the last polish has to be done:
add some details like shadows and lights at the place where two metal-plates come together, make some cracks in the metal, rusty playes etc...
and at some places, the outline is a little bit too much illustrator-like (the air-thing at the plane's belly)
but it's nice as far. i look forward to the finished piece posted here again =) |
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Ken McCracken
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| Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 2:14 am |
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| It looks like an illustration from one of those WWII books you always see on sale in bookstores. Great job . . . ! |
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badoli
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| Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 5:50 am |
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| The cockpit glass could have some reflection of a sunny sky... and some smoke streams at the exhausts... |
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Probotech
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| Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 3:56 pm |
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looking good, but as ppl have said, more detail and a clear distinct lightsource. 
I love p-51 btw, my fav airplane. |
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smalls
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 1:16 pm |
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thats saweet man!
take every ones advice though..hehe
good job |
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