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herbie · Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 1:19 am

I haven't done very much and i know i'm not even close to the average level here. Any tips that help me get better would be nice

It's a biker girl i've been working on. Done in painter.

bikergirl

[ July 18, 2001: Message edited by: herbie ]

Ken McCracken · Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 7:16 am

I would say go in there and tighten everything up. She looks pretty good so far, but she suffers from a case of the digital fuzzies. That, and a background.

herbie · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 5:30 pm

Ok, i have cleaned her up a bit, rearanged some bodyparts en gave her a slitely different outfit.
any tips on how to go from here?
It still needs a background, but i'm out of ideas and it's way past my bedtime

bikergirl

zero21 · Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2001 7:56 pm

Looking good, love the purple patch you have put on the shoulder.

Think the helmet could drop a wee bit, makes it look like she having her neck stretched at the moment.

Thats the first thing that I saw.

Keep it up though, looking nice.

herbie · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 6:47 am

thanx for the comment guys,
I'll get started on a background.

Thanx for the tip about the streched neck.
Another thing that's been bothering me is to get her breasts right. they seem a bit strange, but i can't figure out what's wrong.

Anthony J · Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 8:30 am

looks better than your original
but you should keep on working on it.

get a background in there.

[ July 23, 2001: Message edited by: Anthony J ]