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MisterOwl · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 6:04 pm

First of all, I really hope this post works. Its been a really long time since I participated on this forum, and am really excited to get back into the game.

This is a sketch of an old character of mine. I'm trying to re-vamp him because his storyline was cool, but he was sort of dull. Maybe you people can send me off into the right direction. Hope you enjoy!

MisterOwl · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 6:08 pm

J Bradford · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 6:10 pm

Nice character, feels very comic bookish. I think the cyan color works well with his anatomy, along with the shading.

Changes - extruding something out of his body would be nice, it seems like all you can see is his anatomy with a tight costume attached to him. Maybe some shoulder pards, a nice helmet, or bring out some boots with more defenition. By doing this it wouldn't really stear away from the comic feel he has, but would give him a little more character.

That's all I can think of for now - good work.

Shirotsugh · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 9:56 pm

It might just be me, but the head seems a little flat.

MisterOwl · Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2001 8:37 am

Here's one of his head:

MisterOwl · Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2001 8:40 am

MisterOwl · Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2001 8:44 am

Argg! I can't seem to make the picture work! Sorry about all of the broken links and empty posts!

Dryfire · Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2001 9:52 am

lol those colors are great dude. .and so is the shading.. i'm really digging this one ;-) tell me when you do the comic :-)