[Isix]

I tried not to rip off Blizzard's Terran Marines/Medics too much, though it was difficult...
Comments?

[MoleculeMan]

I really like the way that the head tilts and expresses emotion even though it is mostly covered.

Some ideas i have for the picture. You might want to add a helmet or head protection. It really depends on the context this person works in. If they are a field medic in the future they might like to protect thier head from head hurts. Some more attachments, like cutters and so on would really make it look better.

Blizzard did a really good job on the terran medics, and i think the best ways to avoid looking blatantly like them would be to 1. not make it all white, make sure you dont have a long strip of fabric down the front, and i don't think that your's really looks like them.

If you are not already, you might want to clean up the lines, or smooth some of the shading. Cleaning it up actally. heh.

Good pose.

[J Bradford]

Good work man, keep working on that detail. There are still a lot of sketchy lines. You have gotten a good system down for the shading, but a little more contrast would help. Was this done in photoshop? You might want to search around for some tutorials (such as dahibi's) to gain some more techniques.