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Vgta · Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 5:10 am

Okay I've been working on this on and off for awhile, but I need some help. Ideas for coloring, lights, composition.
Thanks

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Vgta · Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 9:06 am

Good God, no comments? at least if it sucks say so

Wyatt Turner · Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 9:10 am

Naw its good,,, people just arn't replying these days.. So much to look at... Plus the Work in progress section seems a little slow.

But your Image just needs some coloring... nice and evil with hot chicks, what more can you ask for.. Color time...

jasonN · Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 1:43 pm

hey Vgta, I really like the snake heads, they're well drawn

But the girl is kinda confusing, I don't really know what she's doing? Is she trying to grab it? Anyway, maybe an expression on her face or maybe some wind in her hair will give the feeling of a struggle. I'm not too sure, this is a really tough thing to draw. Hopefully some others will be able to think of something. Good luck

edible snowman · member Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998

her torso is too thick and too long. i think shes got kinda broad shoulders, but that could be preference. her face also looks kind of odd to me.

Konspiracy · junior member Member # Joined: 13 Jul 2001 Posts: 17

she maybe is riding on the creature because it looks like she's smileing or something , lol..doesnt look like she's fighting it, cause then her expression would be like.. uh.. tense?..i dunno.... is she riding it?

jHof · Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 3:37 pm

I'd throw in another line or some shadowing on "her" right side. Thats the area that is bugging me. Makes her waist look E'uge...

Can't wait to see the color version, whats your back ground gona be?

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Vgta · Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2001 5:17 am

Hey cool, replies. The story behind the drawing was taken from the book of revelations, I was browsing on the net and was reading about some of the "visions" that one of prophets had and he saw a seven headed demon with a woman riding it.

Wyatt: demons and hot chicks rule

Jason: cool I'll work on the girl more

edible snowman: thank you sir, I will work on that. I did redo the face, it was bothering me too.

Konspiracy: Yeah she's supposed to be riding it, I think I'll flesh out the rear of the creature a bit more.

jHof: I'm debating still what the backgrounds and the actual colors of the piece are going to be, tell you what, this one reason why I love digital painting. I can mess around as much as I want and still have the original piece un-touched.

Thank you guys.

Any ideas for a color scheme??

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exo13 · member Member # Joined: 31 May 2001 Posts: 243

I guess it's fine except that here waste seems to be too wide, unless she's supposed to be over weight and in which case there's nothing wrong with it. Something about here leg bugs me too. It doesn't seem to have much definition in terms of muscle. You should also make the lines a little smoother. Other than that, it looks great. The hydra, demon things look awsome.

I know what you mean when it comes to no one ever even attempting to reply with feedback anymore. What the heck has happened to the board? I try to make a point to give whatever help I can. (...umm... could someone please crit my raptors in the finished gallery section?) You should look into the TeamGT concept design forum. It's not very big yet that just means that your all the more likely to get help. I've tried joining but for some reason I never got that email.

anyway, good luck