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JiMSouL junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Jul 2001 Posts: 38 Location: Australia
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2001 6:50 am |
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Been tracking sijun forums for a while and this is my first post, so ah, hello!
I've been sketching for a while and generally I progress now and again (although im still completely amateur..) but I think a lack of feedback and criticism is killing my art so ah....I'm looking foward to active participation and feedback in this community from now on if y'all will have me around.
Just for the hell of it I've posted up some misc bits of art. I've picked them to bits a hundred times but can never seem to improve them (even though i can see whats wrong.)
Be harsh if u do wanna crit & comment =)
First ever pure cg work (no pencil sketch)
It's all rubbish but I guess the only hope is that it can somehow improve
JiM.
>>Fixed the links up, should all work now...
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JiMSouL junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Jul 2001 Posts: 38 Location: Australia
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2001 6:53 am |
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Moved all the files to my isp space so it should all work now. Although knowing my luck they will notice the jump in access and lock the account off lol.
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Lazysam junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2001 Posts: 41
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 5:08 am |
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still dont work |
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JiMSouL junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Jul 2001 Posts: 38 Location: Australia
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 6:29 pm |
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Nehow, apart from the first one where i skipped the original sketch, they have all been done from an original fully shaded sketch and then touched up / modded in paintshop using my dinky trackball...any ideas on what i should focus on improving would be very welcome =)
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Ninja junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Feb 2001 Posts: 25 Location: Sydney Australia
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 8:19 pm |
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I must say, the puppetmaster one is a brilliant concept.
I think a chucky like face and miniature bow tie would complement it's 'evilness' well.
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JiMSouL junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Jul 2001 Posts: 38 Location: Australia
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 10:08 pm |
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Heh, thanks =)
They are all pretty rough...when i did them id never spend more than about 3 hrs on a pic lol....and i always wondered why things never looked as good as the could |
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