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JiMSouL
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2001 6:50 am     Reply with quote
Been tracking sijun forums for a while and this is my first post, so ah, hello!

I've been sketching for a while and generally I progress now and again (although im still completely amateur..) but I think a lack of feedback and criticism is killing my art so ah....I'm looking foward to active participation and feedback in this community from now on if y'all will have me around.

Just for the hell of it I've posted up some misc bits of art. I've picked them to bits a hundred times but can never seem to improve them (even though i can see whats wrong.)

Be harsh if u do wanna crit & comment =)


First ever pure cg work (no pencil sketch)





It's all rubbish but I guess the only hope is that it can somehow improve

JiM.

>>Fixed the links up, should all work now...

[ July 14, 2001: Message edited by: JiMSouL ]

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JiMSouL
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2001 6:53 am     Reply with quote
Moved all the files to my isp space so it should all work now. Although knowing my luck they will notice the jump in access and lock the account off lol.

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Lazysam
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 5:08 am     Reply with quote
still dont work
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JiMSouL
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 6:29 pm     Reply with quote
Nehow, apart from the first one where i skipped the original sketch, they have all been done from an original fully shaded sketch and then touched up / modded in paintshop using my dinky trackball...any ideas on what i should focus on improving would be very welcome =)

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Ninja
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 8:19 pm     Reply with quote
I must say, the puppetmaster one is a brilliant concept.

I think a chucky like face and miniature bow tie would complement it's 'evilness' well.

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JiMSouL
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 10:08 pm     Reply with quote
Heh, thanks =)
They are all pretty rough...when i did them id never spend more than about 3 hrs on a pic lol....and i always wondered why things never looked as good as the could
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