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Zekie
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 Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 11:07 pm |
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Just something I scanned.. I havent used my scanner so I kinda forgot for a moment on how to scan. ROFL. anyhow.. the drawing.. Still working on it. The pose is like boring. I need to add some more detailing and actually work on some action poses. anyhow. C&Cs welcome.
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JiMSouL
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| Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 11:20 pm |
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Ok, just line art atm so no real crit on the technical side, looks pretty good (are the legs a touch too long??) or might just be me lol.
>>edit..yeah, is it either the arms are too short or the legs too long? she can hardly touch her hips 
However the facial expression makes her look pretty calm, as does the pose of most of her body but she seems to have the shield and sword in a prone position? maybe making her overall appearance a bit more calm would compliment the picture?
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[ July 16, 2001: Message edited by: JiMSouL ] |
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 4:40 am |
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Dryfire
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| Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 7:48 am |
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| sweet dude... you should darken the lines though or sumthing so its easier to see on bad monitors like mine :-) |
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Motorfish
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| Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 1:34 pm |
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Left foot (facing the viewer) could stand to be turned to the left a bit more to give the impression of weight a bit more. Also, flatten out that foot as well please.
[ July 16, 2001: Message edited by: Motorfish ] |
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