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roundeye · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 6:45 am

is the anatomy looking ok? i allways screw up on poses like this. is her left arm too long? right tit too big? im not sure. any comments?

Vgta · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 6:51 am

Damn that's looking good.

Her right boob, our left, does look a tad lopsided and lower that the left one.

The rest looks perfect. Kick ass work, love that style.

Dan3d · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 7:54 am

Here arms are fine and I think there is nothing wrong with the right breast being lower. Her right shoulder is a little lower, so her stance would make the right breast appear a little lower. Besides this, no woman is perfectly symetrical

. I think you hit it dead on.

I love your work, especially the armor girl you posted on the conceptual design forum. Would you mind sharing how you do these types of sketches? Are they all digital, done on paper, or a mix thereof?

exo13 · member Member # Joined: 31 May 2001 Posts: 243

That's awsome. I wouldn't worry too much about it in terms of mistakes or anything. It's a sketch (a damn good one too). You did a great job of distinguishing fabric tecture from skin and adding the shine on the eyes. When I sketch, I never pay that kind of attension to detail (my scanners not good enough). Anyway, this is great. Will we see a colored version any time soon?

agent44 · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:23 am

can't wait to see how this turns out.
She's lookin' good, except for her right arm. it's too short, it seems like the elbo comes to the top of the hip, whereas the left elbo comes to the bottom of the hip.
Other than that, it's great.

(edit) oh and I really like her outfit, neat design.

[ June 12, 2001: Message edited by: agent44 ]

exo13 · member Member # Joined: 31 May 2001 Posts: 243

That's awsome. I wouldn't worry too much about it in terms of mistakes or anything. It's a sketch (a damn good one too). You did a great job of distinguishing fabric tecture from skin and adding the shine on the eyes. When I sketch, I never pay that kind of attension to detail (my scanners not good enough). Anyway, this is great. Will we see a colored version any time soon?

KOryH · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:38 am

Once again the EYE has impressed the heck out of me!!! I love your style, the way you control the lines and hit darks and leave the lights blown out. It rocks. However...
I did notice on this particular drawing you could work on the hand pose a little better.
It seems to me that the hand isn't following the form/perspective of the gun. also the handle seems a slightly thin.
Any who, It still kicks ass! great job.
I like you color work too, btw.

roundeye · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:39 am

thanx, yea well i move her right tit up like 3px and it looks better. dan3d, its just airbrush over scanned pencil, building it up slowly. agent, are you sure? i think its the other way around, i think im gonna shorten the upper portion of her left arm. and exo13, i think i will try and colour it. thanx for your help guys

neebhore · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:52 am

Dude, i adore your sketches.
Personally i think the breasts look fine, considering the left shoulder has a buckle on it and the top is being pulled up, i imagine the left breast would also be pulled up?!

SoMK · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 9:03 am

Yeah sure, either the right arm is too short or the left one too long (especially for the foreshortening) but your values are way cool and it's excellllent :)) Me likes a lot !

geoman2k · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 9:08 am

that is great! i think her left arm's elbow is a *little* too low, but other than that its great. i saw someone say that the right bood was too low- i disagree. i think that she is standing a little crooked, leaning one shoulder down and the other one up a bit. looks awesome.

roundeye · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:08 pm

im not showing you guys the gun yet cuz it sucks! arg! so frustrating. im gonna put a cigar in her hand instead! haha. is it getting better or worse?? i cant tell anymore

nt · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:32 pm

Ooooh I so like your style Roundeye!!!! I wish I could see more of you're stuff somewhere? Do you have webpages?
That gorl look's so good! I can't wait to see it finished!

Keep up the unik work!

neebhore · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:41 pm

Yeah it's looking better, but i thought the gun looked fine. I'd like to have a go at colouring it if I get the free time, and of course, you don't mind?
*me flutters eyelids and pouts, in hope of persuading roundeye

roundeye · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:54 pm

by all means, please do! id love to see yours or anyone elses take on it. cuz ive given up for now. you did a absolute kick ass job on that dog by the way, it ruled.

edit: youre a girl i hope! haha

[ June 12, 2001: Message edited by: roundeye ]

Prometheus-ANJ · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 4:15 pm

Looks great, love the sketchyness of it.
Here's the crits...

She's a bit of a twiggy ain't she? Her left arm could use some foreshortening. It appears longer than her right arm.
The boob asymetry doesn't annoy me.

The pose is kinda uninteresting, she is just standing there. Perhaps if You gave her face another expression or angled it some? She needs to make a statement like "Come get some!", right now she looks a bit to passive.

Frosted Flame · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 4:36 pm

Whoa, she's hot. Nice boobies

I really love your style too Roundeye, it's very unique, and that's HARD to accomplish.

Wonderful!

geoman2k · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 5:33 pm

i liked the revolver- something about a cjic with a really huge revolver that is just awesome.
she looks kinda like haly berry (i know the spelling is off) from swordfish... love the hair.

Seraphire · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 6:47 pm

Damn, I like that.

Chin · junior member Member # Joined: 28 Mar 2001 Posts: 29

That is so incredibly good.

Only crit is her left arm. It's bent in a way that has it coming towards the viewer, but it's as long as it would be if it were straight up and down.

Her right arm looks fine to me, as it's bending away a bit thus it looks shorter from straight on.

sear · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 12:06 am

you're the best!

neebhore · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 12:50 am

quote:
Originally posted by roundeye:
by all means, please do! id love to see yours or anyone elses take on it. cuz ive given up for now. you did a absolute kick ass job on that dog by the way, it ruled.

edit: youre a girl i hope! haha

[ June 12, 2001: Message edited by: roundeye ]

LOL, i'm afraid not dude, didn't you see my self portrait? Also if you click on my profile...
Glad you liked my wolf/dog, why didn't you say anything then?! I was really chuffed with it and hardly anybody said anything about it! Nevermind, I'll have a go at colouring it. ...I just remmebered about fluttering my eyelids and pouting at you... that's how you got confused...*looks around... um...

[edit] I type too fast for my own good

[ June 13, 2001: Message edited by: neebhore ]

exo13 · member Member # Joined: 31 May 2001 Posts: 243

quote

Quote:

by all means, please do! id love to see yours or anyone elses take on it. cuz ive given up for now.

All right, I'm gonna hold you to that. You may be sorry though.

Here's a quick color rendition I made in painter. I tried not to deface your drawing too much. It was actually all done with painter's water-color brushes. Oh yeah, I hope you don't mind but I changed the gun. Like it? If you do, thanks, If you don't, I appologise for defacing a perfectly good drawing.

Well here it is...

roundeye · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 8:58 am

not bad, body seems a little TOO brown. could have lightened up the shadows a bit as well. it shows that you were trying to preserve the pencil. you shouldnt be afraid to just slop paint over the whole thing. the grainy pencils showing through kinda make it a little muddy... i DO like the gun a lot though.

likewise i hope u dont mind me painting over yours haha. i had i few mins so i thought id see if i could paint the face. i moved around the lips n stuff.

[ June 13, 2001: Message edited by: roundeye ]

Smixels · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 2:20 pm

Hey roundeye, your b/w are really good, and your coloring is just as good. Mind posting progress pictures and how ya do it. Your lines are tight and your shading is great.

melted petal · member Member # Joined: 11 Dec 2000 Posts: 82

I was thinking that maybe the different sections of the suit could be different colors. break it up a bit and make it even more peculiar/interesting.

burn0ut · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 5:05 pm

what do you think you are... some kinda... roundeye!!!#@@@

ahhhd dubububububbubub

Darkglade · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 5:33 pm

Beautiful.

Darkglade · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 6:57 pm

Just wanted to see what milti-coloured would look like, I think I killed your beautiful drawing.

Sorry if I ruined it:

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Vgta · Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 5:24 am

HEHE I guess might as well add another colored version

This one was done in Photoshop

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