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Magicman
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2001 5:51 am     Reply with quote


hi,

i try to draw a little fairy, but i think i have wrong colors. can you agree with me? any kind of other critic is very welcome.

bye magicman
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JickyJak
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2001 10:07 am     Reply with quote
Yeah the colors are off...not sure what to suggest though. Personally I like saturated colors, but with more subtle variations in color transition.

The figure doesn't seem very fairy like, she is rather scary, with the skeletal rib thing happening. I would soften her look a little. Women are generally drawn with curvy proportions and not to many hard angles, but drawing is not my specialty here, maybe someone more qualified in this area could answer this.

Otherwise good start methinks...cheers.
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theresa
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2001 11:29 pm     Reply with quote
her right boob is bigger than the left
(just look at the top of it where they start)


i would feed her a little bit more.
hehe
yay fairies!
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William H. Daniels
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PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2001 8:49 pm     Reply with quote
Next on Geraldo: Fairies Hooked On Smack!

Seriously, put some meat on those bones. She needs some biscuits and gravy!

Mercy!

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NukleoN
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PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2001 3:08 am     Reply with quote
Hi there...

Yeah she needs to be soft and fleshy..like most women...and that's a good thing....no need to emphasize stomach muscles..unless you really want to, but that is going to take away some obvious fem qualities unless you absolutely nail it. Her areolas seem way dark for her coloration, the breasts are a bit far apart...looking a bit harder than they should. Her bellybutton is a bit too low...the woman's bellybutton is a critical area, since it is surrounded by a little bit of fat and has a look distinct from a man's.

good start tho...just gotta feminize her a lil' bit.

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Magicman
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 9:33 am     Reply with quote
hi guy,

after a long time i paint a bit on the little fairy.

...but, i think i�ve the same colorproblem.
can you help my?
how do you think the hair?





bye magicman
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mk
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 3:06 pm     Reply with quote
Moin...

hmmm... i dont know but i think the archtype for fairys is more fragile... like a thiny glass object. not a female more something like a girl. Allways giggling, laughing around, flying and hiding behind objects and so on...
why iam telling this? hmmm... because i think you should change the position. Its not very intressting because she does nothing and its not a natural pose. Take a look at old images (DaVinci, Michellangelo) they really made great poses. If you can get the book "Drawing the Marvel Style" somewhere...buy it!
Ok... maybe i have an absolutely diffrent picture form fairys... but ive added a pic how i see fairys... its not good, but demonstrates a bit what i said.... i hope


and last but not least... paint paint paint... (maybe try to get in a course, where you can oserve naked chicks Sex n Art... hehehe)

MK
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