[Snakebyte]

Well, what’s the verdict? His arms are very rough from having to be changed 3 or 4 times and the stick will eventually become a lance (yea, a big lance). The lines on his face are scratch marks made by some cat or something (not my idea).

I know his right hand needs work along with a few other areas I’m just concerned with proportions and such.

[Basement bound]

Looks pretty good. I can see a few things that don't quite look right one is the head in relationship to the rest of the body it seems not quite centered. The second thing is the elbow areas don't look resolved yet. I hope that helps.

JA

[Molybdenum-Indiscipline]

Bring his left shoulder down slightly (that is the shoulder on our right side). This would make his appearance less 'tense' or hunched. (Unless this is your aim of course). I also feel that the left shoulder could be slightly wider. Also, I concur with Basement Bounds comment about the unresolved appearance of the elbow. I hope this helps you Aside from these few things it looks to be coming along very well.

[melted petal]

First off you've got a nice concept going on here. I like the overall flow of the picture.

I agree the head needs to be a bit more centerred to the body and the neck just doest act like that. He doesnt seem to have a collar bone (clavical). He also needs an adams apple and a few tendons are missing. Just check out a couple of pictures and use them as a basis for it.

Also I think the area where the left wrist doesnt seem to be there. A little more definition will help a lot.

Last thing is his right shoulder. I cant tell if the pice of armor is meant to cover and wrap around his whole shoulder or if it is just covering the front of it.

All in all I like it though. Looks like a pretty seasoned veteran.