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Rorsh member
Member # Joined: 21 May 2001 Posts: 63 Location: Scotland
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2001 3:38 pm |
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I've been working on this for about a year and a half in a way. I did the pencils and half the inks in belgium a year and a half ago, finished inks half a year ago and started the colouring.
I swear I will finish it eventually.
Just working on the spirit trail stuff and then planning on going over everything to add polish and some realism touches.
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Sparks junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jun 2001 Posts: 32 Location: Phoenix, AZ
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2001 6:38 pm |
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Pretty nice, although the proportions are a little scary. Mostly the arms, they seem too long, and the zombies are is definitely going against the joint there.... maybe have some bone protruding is it's supposed to be broken. Nice work on the ghost part though, I'm really digging that |
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Zash junior member
Member # Joined: 05 May 2001 Posts: 5 Location: Belgium
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2001 9:32 pm |
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Ror,
My advice would go soemthing like so: I would give the cigaret bud a stronger yellow/orange/red. I would also add a stripe of light brown on the lower sword the girl (Kass?) has. Her thumb needs a bit of darkning. And I think that if you slightly blurred the highlight areas onthe girls and the dark mouth in the blue head it would get rid of the layers of paint and make the thing look better. ONyll slightly because you don't want to loose the texture.
up to you,
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