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Tinusch · Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 9:28 pm

Okay but seriously...

I think the anatomy of the angel is a bit stylized, but it could definitely work if it is properly shaded. Keep working on that, I think the pose has potential.

The clouds are a major part of this picture. As such, I think they should be more complex. A little more detailed and realistic. Take a look at some of ceenda's pictures. I think he even had a cloud tutorial at one point. Maybe it was Loki. One of those two.

But it's looking good so far. Has nice depth to it. Feels very airy and open.

geoman2k · Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 10:36 pm

Tinusch: man, those are some awesome angles

pretty cool, but i think it would look better is the arms weren't pointing forward. :P

the_monkey · Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 11:08 pm

this is my first painting. any shading help or paintover would be most greatly apprecated.

crits and comments desperatly needed.

[ June 17, 2001: Message edited by: the_monkey ]

the_monkey · Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 11:12 pm

doh, i cant believe i wrote "angle" instead of "angel" in the topic. sigh...

tinusch, thanks for the angles, not angels. im fairly new this whole "painting" deal. i usually just sketch. but thanks, im gonna go search for some cloud tutorials on the board.

geoman2k, which way would you like to see the arms point?

Basement bound · Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2001 9:56 am

hey hey here comes the monkey....

You can change the name of the post. Go and edit your first post. I agree the arms should not point forward. If the angel is rising perhaps put the arms to the side. Kinda what you would look like when you are rising to the surface after you have dived off of the diving board.

JA