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Ken McCracken member
Member # Joined: 03 Jun 2001 Posts: 89 Location: Westmont, Illinois
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2001 1:51 am |
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Not really looking for a crit - the face needs work, as do the hands, and that flag thing, etc. and so on.  |
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edible snowman member
Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2001 6:33 pm |
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shes a man baby! the armor is sweet. |
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Ken McCracken member
Member # Joined: 03 Jun 2001 Posts: 89 Location: Westmont, Illinois
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 12:27 am |
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Here is an improvement, I hope . . .
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TekK member
Member # Joined: 01 Jun 2001 Posts: 65 Location: Washington, DC
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 12:58 am |
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hey ken, sweet pic! there's something about her left (our right) leg that bugs me... i'm not sure exactly what it is, it might be a little too far left/back, coz it somehow looks like she has an really unnatural "twist" to her torso... can't really describe it beyond that, though, hope you get what i'm saying... :P besides that, i think the pic's awesome, though you might wanna work just a little bit on the face to make her a little more feminine... as of now, she looks a little "mannish," like snowman said...
cheers,
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toast! member
Member # Joined: 29 Sep 2000 Posts: 442 Location: France
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 3:19 am |
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the real jeanne d'Arc was like this, really mannish ... i guess McCracken wanted her like that and that s a good thing; Jeanne was not a chick like you see on Besson's film ...
thought i agree with the comment on the torso
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Ken McCracken member
Member # Joined: 03 Jun 2001 Posts: 89 Location: Westmont, Illinois
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 5:40 am |
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The reason why the torso twist looks odd, is that none of the metal between her thighs and her arm makes any sense whatsoever. I am making this up as I go. As for her face, I really was looking for a tomboyish type of thing, though I hope people do think it is a woman at first glance. |
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