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Ken McCracken
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2001 1:51 am     Reply with quote
Not really looking for a crit - the face needs work, as do the hands, and that flag thing, etc. and so on.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2001 6:33 pm     Reply with quote
shes a man baby! the armor is sweet.
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Ken McCracken
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 12:27 am     Reply with quote
Here is an improvement, I hope . . .
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 12:58 am     Reply with quote
hey ken, sweet pic! there's something about her left (our right) leg that bugs me... i'm not sure exactly what it is, it might be a little too far left/back, coz it somehow looks like she has an really unnatural "twist" to her torso... can't really describe it beyond that, though, hope you get what i'm saying... :P besides that, i think the pic's awesome, though you might wanna work just a little bit on the face to make her a little more feminine... as of now, she looks a little "mannish," like snowman said...

cheers,
teck
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toast!
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 3:19 am     Reply with quote
the real jeanne d'Arc was like this, really mannish ... i guess McCracken wanted her like that and that s a good thing; Jeanne was not a chick like you see on Besson's film ...

thought i agree with the comment on the torso


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Ken McCracken
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 5:40 am     Reply with quote
The reason why the torso twist looks odd, is that none of the metal between her thighs and her arm makes any sense whatsoever. I am making this up as I go. As for her face, I really was looking for a tomboyish type of thing, though I hope people do think it is a woman at first glance.
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