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Leiquinni
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:17 pm     Reply with quote
This is my first post, but i've been loitering around Dhabih's forum forever.




I'm having some trouble with this new CG of mine, can't seem to match up the skull with the rest of the body, it makes the skin seem less interesting compared to the detail of the skull, what do you think?
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Pringle
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:27 pm     Reply with quote
The picture don't show.
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Leiquinni
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:37 pm     Reply with quote
weird.. alright here's the URL

http://www.angelfire.com/art/dilapidated/baseballCG5_copy.jpg
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Leiquinni
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:39 pm     Reply with quote
blast.. what is wrong with angelfire O_o
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smalls
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 8:56 pm     Reply with quote
drag and drop the URL into the URL box thing on your browser.. cant think of the real word.. sorry.... that is a weird pic.. the smudge was used too much or inappropriately... not looking too good... but everything else.. eh.. its good
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Bubonic
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 4:45 am     Reply with quote
Nice texturing on the skull, how did you go about it?

I like the body, but i am not sure if it is a woman or a man, since it has femine hips and legs, but a mans chest, you should work on that. Its looking good so far, keep up the good work
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Leiquinni
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 2:03 pm     Reply with quote
I thought the main problem was the striking contrast between the texture of the skull (which i'm not even happy with) and the paintbrushy/foggy/messy/BAD look of the skin.

blarg, anyway, where do you think i went wrong with the smudge tool?
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