[l_farley13_l]

This is my first time posting, so let me introduce myself. My name is Adam Farley and I've been drwing since I was 5 ( I'll let you guess how long I've been drawing) Amyway I have been working on a 3d polygonal head (not sub-d or NURBS) From Cinema XL. I have also posted several other drawings etc. Just for critique of technique (sorry for the load time, slow server + lots of images) (warning nudity) Awe hell I'll throw the whole kitchen sink in I hope all those loaded.

Thanks,

Farley13

[l_farley13_l]

Nope this didn't load:

[l_farley13_l]

or ? Sorry I'm new.

bear with me Farley13

[dr . bang]

you're 13 years old ?

[l_farley13_l]

13 like that # next to my name, no that's just my own lucky number. Dr. constructive critism would be nice. Thanks. So what was wrong with them? An tips from a "true master" ? Especially on the pencil sketches.

[ June 04, 2001: Message edited by: l_farley13_l ]

[Bubonic]

hey,

nice pictures, i really like man1.jp the had has some solid good form and everything seems in proportion..

But in your 3d head, there are flaws, like the nostrils should come out from the face,there isn't any real curvature, it just fades into the face, you should fix that..

and the inner part of the eye, the tear duct is too big and the eyes are too spread apart.. only 1 eye length should be between them. And the ears are too far back, work on these things and you will have a bettter lookin head, nice texutring, i really like the eyes espically