[TekK]

hi,

i just inked my as-yet-untitled dhabih-inspired sketch in PSP 7.02... wonder if anyone could give some c&c on it...

here's the original sketch (with a slight touch-up): www.crosswinds.net/~thepinklamb/dhabih-inspired2.jpg

and here's the inked version: www.crosswinds.net/~thepinklamb/dhabih-inspired%20lineart.gif

you'll have to copy-paste the shortcuts otherwise the pics won't display... sorry for the inconvenience... :/

thanks,
tekk

[ June 06, 2001: Message edited by: TekK ]

[zero21]

crosswinds won't let me see it!!!!

[nova]

zero21 - drag the addresses to the address bar and go to for the lineart. You'll have to include that last separated bit of text after the second one in the address.

C&C..

The first thing I noticed it's really kinda 'globby'. Try to think of the shapes that make up the human body, like there's a tapered, flattened shape for the chest.. m.. like this: \_/ Less angled though. 'Dynamic Figure Drawing' by Burne Hogarth concentrates on this a lot, almost too much.

So.. block out the shapes first, and go easy on muscle shapes (like that 6-pack and calves) until you have the basic form down.

[ June 04, 2001: Message edited by: Nova ]