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Rossimo member
Member # Joined: 14 Oct 2000 Posts: 59 Location: California, US
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2001 9:43 pm |
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Hey people. I'm still trying to teach myself...I think I'm getting better, just slowly. Anyways, here's something I'm working on at the moment, just finishing up the face. I actually had painted in the rough background with the mountain and all that, but it didn't really look right, so I took it out. So please provide any comments or crits or suggestions you may have on the current state of it, I'd appreciate it
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levik junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Dec 2000 Posts: 23 Location: New York
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2001 10:14 pm |
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Not bad... methinks you need to work on your lines... |
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exo13 member
Member # Joined: 31 May 2001 Posts: 243
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 5:53 pm |
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You deffinently got your painting method down. What kind of software are you using? So far, the only way I can paint in that style is with Corel Painter's oil pastel brush. I'd just say that you need to work on your facial anotomy. Maybe you should add dirt, blood, stuff like that, something you'd expect from a war. Other than that though, it's pretty good. |
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NukleoN member
Member # Joined: 11 May 2001 Posts: 236 Location: CA
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 9:38 pm |
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Noel,
Couldn't help but notice your sig...hey that sux that you will have to explain that the rest of your life and all that..coz I know people will eternally say 'No-Ell' as they've been trained for generations...you know, that Xmas song and all that.
Why don't you just change yer name? (No offense, I changed my middle name to 'THE') hehe.
NukleoN (not my real name)
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NukleoN member
Member # Joined: 11 May 2001 Posts: 236 Location: CA
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 9:43 pm |
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Noel,
Couldn't help but notice your sig...hey that sux that you will have to explain that the rest of your life and all that..coz I know people will eternally say 'No-Ell' as they've been trained for generations...you know, that Xmas song and all that.
Why don't you just change yer name? (No offense, I changed my middle name to 'THE') hehe.
NukleoN (not my real name)
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Dr.Squirley member
Member # Joined: 25 Apr 2001 Posts: 219 Location: Here
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2001 11:10 pm |
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um..... im like an expert on veitnam having been there... sure whatever... anyway thats the wrong type of helmut for u.s. soliders
um you might want to thuink about wheather he is in a field or in some sort of foliage because it was very bright in the fields and alot darker in the forests
you also might wanna make his clothes a bit more worn and comfortable like put a green towel around his neck and like some rusted dog tags around his neck and basically more deatail there in generall
(damn spelling)
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