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Topic : "Naked women! Life Drawings! & Lions! Oh My!" |
Jucas member
Member # Joined: 14 Jan 2001 Posts: 387 Location: Pasadena, CA
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Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 6:41 pm |
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Ok so there's no lions... sorry
But I do have an unfinished life drawing, that I'd thought I would post for some feedback. So with out further delay-
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Jucas member
Member # Joined: 14 Jan 2001 Posts: 387 Location: Pasadena, CA
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2001 10:59 pm |
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Yeah alot of people have been telling me my life drawings are to messy, I think there right but I don't wanna lose my style so I am just gonna clean them up abit. Plus this is just a rough sketch... hmmm.. I don't know about the legs, looks like the perspective is off too me but I can't pin prick it. Thanks about the sig. |
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Dryfire member
Member # Joined: 21 May 2000 Posts: 945 Location: Long Island, NY
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2001 11:37 pm |
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very rough and frantic..nice I think the legs should be a bit longer though.. or maybe just make the feet smaller.. your sig rocks btw! |
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Quinnbeast junior member
Member # Joined: 31 Dec 2000 Posts: 16 Location: Aberdeen, Scotland, UK
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2001 4:48 am |
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What you might need to do is work a bit lighter in the first place, so that you can add some definiton in once you've got the basic shape accurate. The legs look a bit on the short side - for example, compare the distance of the knee to the foot on the right leg, with that of the left - big difference, she'd be walking a bit funny They kinda look a bit on the short side in general though.
The thing with life drawing is, it's all about readjusting based on what you've already drawn, hence why you need to keep it light at the start. If you adjust one part of the body, you often need to change other parts to compensate.
Nice way of working though, I used to be pretty tight arsed with this stuff and it's just not the way to go Just make sure it doesn’t get too messy though either.
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Briareos member
Member # Joined: 24 May 2001 Posts: 392 Location: CA
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2001 12:26 am |
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Looks really nice, very loose. However don't rely on outlining to define your form. I see you have allot of structure and thats good. But you are reinforcing your lines too much on the torso and the top of the breast.
Keep life drawing, I love it!!
-Ben |
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