[XandGash]

How does this look so far? I know the legs are pretty cut for a woman, but that's how I drew them, so I had to color them the same way. Any suggestions on how to make the wall look good?

[pixualize]

Hey this is great!

I especially like the gradient from blue to black in the panel borders and the starburst effect in panel #1.

Like the colors on the girl too.

[XandGash]

Thanks. Here's a slightly updated version. I lightened the girl up to differentiate the colors between the two, and I removed a stray line in the top panel.

[roundeye]

thats really sweet man!! awsome colouring so far. how to make the wall look nice? try throwing on some monochramatic graff maybe?
btw, are those like ears coming off the chicks head? do you have any other pages with better views of the characters?

[XandGash]

Here are the first two pages of the scene. I didn't color these though.





And here is a 3 step process of the rabbit. I colored this one.



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[SpiralEye]

Looks, great, though the subject makes me a bit uncomfortable looking at (especially at work).
Hey, how did you get your scanned pencil lines to clean up so well? I'm new to the digital art, so I've not found a good method I like yet. Oh, and could you help me figure out the coloring on the post I put up that's called Stahloste?

Thanks

Royal

[XandGash]

I just fiddle with the brightness and contrast until it looks right.

I checked your topic. I'd like to help you, but I'm not too good with metal fx. All I can really suggest it to solidify your colors first, like someone else said.

[Matt Elder]

Wow!! The colouring really compliments the line work and it is amazing when both of these are well done how much it truly "lifts" the image. I personally like how you have sharp lines in your "3 step process" image than the slightly faded edges in your original posting. Either way though it is great. The character is definately cut and almost borders on being too unrealistic. In the first page I'm having a problem making out what that thing is down the bottom on the angle. Also in your 5th panel, what is that? A guys head with something coming out of the top of it. It doesn't make any sense considering the panel that follows it. Again, love your work.

[XandGash]

Sure, I'll post them when I find the exact file names.

Thanks for the input on the wall.

[shardik]

aweeeessssssssommmmmeee

[VLA]

Thats some really good stuff ! I like it alot ! is it for a online comic or something ?

[NukleoN]

Love the linework! Very Manga-esque, and the coloring is pretty cool too.