Sijun Forums :: View topic - First post, first head ---

echo-x · Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 5:24 am

Hia!
This is my first post here, and the first human model i'm working on. Wanted to get some comments so far on this in progress piece. Other views at http://www.echo-x.com/inprogress/

echo

Jamison · Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 10:04 am

I like it, cool eyes, good job, keep it up

SpiralEye · Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 1:23 pm

Most mouths' corners end below the pupil of each eye, and most eyes are only 1-1.5 eyelengths apart. Look in the mirror to see what I mean. Also, the lips look a little silicon-enhanced to me. Great stuff, though--I certainly couldn't do it on the cimputer.

Royal :]

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 3:02 pm

great picture!

spiraleye:: once again, those are ideal figures and if not going for realism, can be exaggerated a bit here and there. Just look at anime

shardik · Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 9:47 am

show the difference between the knuckles and the rest of the finger more.. she looks like shes been through some tough times so make them scratched up or scarred or whitened or something

echo-x · Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 11:47 pm

shardik,
Good note about the knuckles - some scarring would really give her hands personality. Her fingernails are not the long sexy ones usually found on womens hands, and that was sortof a happy accident. But I think i'm going to follow on that vein and weather up those knuckles.

Thanks for the other comments too guys!

echo www.echo-x.com