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Phalcon
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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2001 2:17 pm     Reply with quote


Please let me have any suggestions good/bad/or otherwise..Thanks in advance
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Phalcon
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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2001 2:48 pm     Reply with quote
Sorry about the extremely large picture size
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Bjorn
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Location: Groningen, The Netherlands
PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2001 4:20 am     Reply with quote
It's so big I can only view it piece by piece...but here goes: I think you have a problem where the mouth is concerned which is toobad, because the eyes look real nice to me.

The upper lip seems stiff, like cardboard rather then skin or flesh...try smoothing that if you can...
And the way I see it, if his mouth is opened that far, the jaw tilts so much that the lower row of teeth isn't straight, but we see it more from above revealing the natural curving of the jaw and the row of teeth.

Looks pretty nice tho. Keep at it.

Da Bjorn
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Myself
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Location: Duna�jv�ros, Hungary
PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2001 6:41 am     Reply with quote
looks fine, but the chain and the teeth are very flat
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shardik
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PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2001 9:39 am     Reply with quote
the nose looks flat give it some form
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