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Tiger Eaten
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 Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 11:17 pm |
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I like your forms and the start of the expression of your center swat trooper. If you are not sure if you should continue or not I suggest you ignore the two other guys in the back ground for now and see what happens when you touch up your center man. You might also want to give a rough suggestion as to where they are coming from, whats in the background. Very rough shapes should do. If I had my wacom here I would love to make an attempt to continue this picture but it will be another few weeks until that happens. If you do decide to refine it you might want to either reveal a little more of the troopers chest or move up a bit, the current angle seems a tad awkward to me. Keep at it. 
[ May 10, 2001: Message edited by: Tiger Eaten ] |
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-Gux-
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| Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 11:29 pm |
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A sketch I did a few days ago. I don't really know how and if I should continue on it. I don't know if the values and contrast are so good either. So any advice on what to do with it is welcomed. |
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-Gux-
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| Posted: Sat May 12, 2001 11:44 pm |
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Thanks for the feedback. I've touched it up a little and played around with the general composition. I think I have serious issues with contrast. Got to work on that :P
More feedback would be great. |
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