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SpiralEye
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Location: Savannah, GA
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 Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 12:36 pm |
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Here's a wildcat I drew for my sister's grad announcements yesterday.
I'm mostly looking for critiques of the cat's stance.
I definitely had problems getting clean lines on the scan in. Any critiques are welcome. Also, if anyone has ideas on cleaning up lines once brought into photoshop, this would also be appreciated. The dust and scratches filter is one suggestion I have yet to try; but I will.
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schwinn
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| Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 4:53 am |
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| If it were me I would make the cat looking directly at you with it's motuh open showing teeth. Much more menacing. |
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Bjorn
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| Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 6:47 am |
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One thing that distracts me in this picture is how the cat's front paw doesn't seem to bear any weight, but just float around...If you were to draw a grid at the level of the base of the letters, I think you'll find the front paw isn't "connecting" with it anmd hence can't be weightbearing.
just my two cents.
Da Bjorn |
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