[Democritus]

heyas.

Im not posting often, but a few of you might remember me. I had a few posts in here, most dealing with the REDHEAD picture I had up. I recieved lots and lots of good feedback that helped me work on and immprove it.

Unfortunately I could not find much time to deal with it until lately and together with a redesign of my Homepage (DCS designs) I uploaded the newest version of it. I hope to recieve some more feedback that helps me bring that picture into a state where I can consider it done.

It looks pretty good and I would call it almost finished, but im unsure, so I tought I'd ask you guys, if you got some ideas on how to improve it, and my skills.

Okay enough Bla Bla from me. The image is called face_04.jpg (what a great title, eh?) and you can find it here:
http://www.gameart.com/hosted/dcs/temp.asp

if you wanna comment on the other stuff you can find on my page - feel free to.

thanks for your time.


-democritus

[edible snowman]

i think you're shading with too much black.

[mutok]

i agree. it appears that you used dodge and burn extensively in the picture.. while useful, sometimes it is better to achieve different values by hand-choosing them.