[RRoam]

pondering if theres any bugs in this face... or just things that shouldnt be there... or something ... *sigh*

[G Man]

Now That I really like, it looks great, just more detail and it'll be cool .

Makes up for my comment on your webpage.

great stuff,
-gav

[Farnz]

It looks to me like the nose may be a bit out of perspective(turned to the right a little to much)

[mutok]

there are no eyes but i'm sure you noticed that ... if you are trying to maintain them in shadow, bring down the shadow a bit and make it less angular

[RRoam]

ARG!! he has no eyes!!!... *realizing*

thanks for the tip...
i dont think i will proceed with this pic, but since i havent drawn so much human forms, i learn

[ May 05, 2001: Message edited by: RRoam ]

[SushiMaster]

I tried to fix it up, seeing as I spent some time over the holidays trying to draw faces. Of course, my technique sucks, and even my knowledge sucks, but I thought I could pick up a flaw or two and try to fix them.

Humble rework:


Hope it helps...

I straightened up the brows... if you look at someone face on they actually go downwards towards the side of his face. In your case, you're looking at a slight angle, but not enough to make them arch upwards so much. I straightened the nose, which was the easy fix. I also messed around with the lips, cause I thought that lip looked very disturbing. I applied the Hogarth way of having the lower lip slightly thinner in the middle (funny, but most other teaching materials don't mention that, some even don't draw it). I think it looks a bit better this way... of course I could be wrong :-)

Oh, and I added an upper lip, cause it still looked disturbing.

So, I hope it helps, and I hope my very poor skill doesn't offend anyone :-P

Daniel

[RRoam]

Sushimaster: thanks... i guess i could have upped a pic with lower compression factor... and i must say your member number rocks

[mutok]

and you don't like my member number?

[SushiMaster]

rofl :-P I never noticed it :-P

Daniel