[Brainswitch]

[Frozen Consciousness]

Very nicely done.

Especially like the bottom heads. Got the style just right. The hair is good. Can't actually find a fault, apart from the fact they are pencil sketchs rather than coloured CGs.

The only critique I think I have is the top guys Armour... the shading below the main chest plate is straight on the left half and looks as if it's curved on the right. It looks to me as if there should be a definate point where the line should "kink"... if you see what I mean. Either that or the left side should be a little curved. (Dependant on if you want the armour to have sharp edges or to be slightly curved.) Just so the sides match up and look symetrical.

The shading on the armour itself isn't as good as the rest, I think there should be some shadow under the arm (since the light source is coming from the top left). Plus, if you think of the armour as a box, that side would be in shadow anyway.

otherwise, proportians check out and the pose doesn't look too bad.

Hope that all makes sense... I'm in a critiqung mood today (not sure if that's a good thing or not)

[ April 28, 2001: Message edited by: Frozen Consciousness ]

[Dr.Squirley]

hey buddy didnt you already post that in finished work..... um ok cool...we should hang out sometime..will you be in maine anytime soon?

[Dr.Squirley]

hey i was just looking at the girls agian and i seem to think that the shine on the hair doesnt seem quite right, maybe its just me...Crazy am i now

[edible snowman]

i like how clean they are. my sketches are usually really scribbly.