[kapowee]

Would really love some constructive crits ecspecially on the coloring, I suck at coloring.

[Guy]

well first off. the eyes just bug me. im guessing you were trying to get a bit of a anime look to them, but it just doesnt work.. for me at least. make them a bit smaller and it could look a lot nicer.

looking further down. there seems to be something odd with the waist area. i cant really figure it out though.. sorry. keep working at it.

[Dryfire]

yeah i agree with the eyes thing.. anime chicks usually have like alien shaped heads i guess and the big eyes just don't work on this chick.. she's too umm preoportioned correctly i guess I'd go with a simpler light source as well.. if you think about it you very rarely see people that have lighting coming directly from where your eyes are.. i'm stick with somthing basic and then modify the lighting later.. start with like a simple left right or top... hmm i typed way too much here :-)

[kapowee]

Ok guys I see what you mean about the eyes thing so hows this one

[Bishop_Six]

The right buttcheek appears larger than the left one. I'd say study up your anatomy and you'll be on your way to happiness

[zenonithus]

The 2nd face is very Elisabeth Berkly (Showgirls. Yeah, work on your anatomy. Skin shading isn't so bad.

[theresa]

hahahahah shes a warrior hahahheeeeahhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaa yeah okay. hehehe SLUT