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Tommy · member Member # Joined: 30 Jan 2001 Posts: 142

Something I worked out this afternoon. It's obviously not finished, since it's in here. But does anyone have any good suggestions or crits? Enayla, you're damn good at these things, so maybe you could help me?

Yeah, and there's something weird with the eyes. Oh well. Check into that later. I'm too tired now.

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"The only difference between me and a madman is that I'm not mad."
- Salvador Dali (1904-1989)

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andskj · Guest Member #

Realy nice Tommy. I have never seen you do this kinds of work before. I mention her eyes. I think they are greate. You know when you start stare at a certain point, and you do this for some time, you get this look. (vanskelig � forst�....kanskje)

Anyway, I like it, and can't wait to see the finished. Eventhough it is realy good now!

trudel · Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2001 5:42 am

Cool work Tommy.
I saw the nazy earlier, you seem to have a style of own.
my crit on this one is that the skin and face look flat compared to the eyes and lips.

Tommy · member Member # Joined: 30 Jan 2001 Posts: 142

Andskj- Thank you. I'm not too fond of the eyes myself right now, but I'm planning on painting some more on her this weekend. I have a bad tendency of moving on to the next image. Hehe. Neida, ikke s� vanskelig � forst�.

Trudel- Yeah, you're right. It's kind of flat, so I should add more shading to it. Thanks for the comments.

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Eric Pommer · Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2001 5:33 am

There's something very appealing about your style here. I can't quite pin it down, but something about the crispness appeals to me.

At the moment, I think the detail of the face is not carried through into the hair...are yo planning to add more detail there?

Great job on the mouth!

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snubbenx · Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2001 7:05 am

green eyes will make her look even warmer.

Tommy · member Member # Joined: 30 Jan 2001 Posts: 142

Wow, replies. Hehe.

Eric Pommer- Yeah, I'm planning on adding more detail several places, but the hair needs special attention. I'll post as soon as it's updated. Thanks for the reply. Much appreciated.

Snubbenx- yeah, probably. Might experiment with it.

Thanks again.

zenonithus · Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2001 7:51 am

Nice! Though she looks a little heat exausted. A little too much red on the ears and forhead. If it's caustics reflecting from the hair, then make the red more subtle.