[Jukkat]

Hello

Here is some shots of my female im modeling. The goal is to get her heroic, shes gona be a Amazone warrior of some kind, so the propotions are little off, im not trying to get a realistic woman.

all critic are welcome !

(this is modeled im maya, done whit polys no subdiv or enything else)
www.graph3d.bizland.com/Fe_Back.jpg www.graph3d.bizland.com/Fe_Front_1.jpg www.graph3d.bizland.com/Fe_Front_2.jpg www.graph3d.bizland.com/Fe_Front_3.jpg www.graph3d.bizland.com/Fe_Front_4.jpg www.graph3d.bizland.com/Fe_Front_5.jpg www.graph3d.bizland.com/Fe_Front_6.jpg www.graph3d.bizland.com/Fe_Front_7.jpg


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/Jukkat

[This message has been edited by Jukkat (edited March 30, 2001).]

[Awetopsy]

thats looking fairly good. My only crit is that the buttocks and pelvic area seems really bulbous. I dunno.. It kinda makes the front and back not really match.. Im not sure why... seems very round in front.

[galen]

its looking quite good, but i personally would soften up the stomach area...it's always been something that bothers me about human computer models, and female computer models in particular.

it seems that people have a strange need to over-emphasize the stomach muscles, and unless a woman works that area a lot, they're not going to be very clearly defined (even if she is quite active, they're not gonna be super-rock-hard)



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The truth is somewhere in between the first and the fortieth drink.

[Mr. Stagger Lee]

I'll begin with the body.

Over all I feel that the lines are too sharp (the line running down her abdomen, which also goes too far up, the line in her back and the V-shape that connects to the uhm.. butt-crack (there's probably a better word for that)). Try smoothing them out a bit as they make the model look a little plastic.

The section where the stomach-area meets the pubic area is also too smooth. The stomach alway stick out a little more than the bupic area (or 'mount of venus').

The scapula (skulderblad) also looks like it's too far up.

Also, the arms are missing.

The Face:

The eyebrow-section seem to be pushed back too much, giving her a primitive look. Try bringing the eyebrow-section (I don't know the correct word) and forehead forward a little.
Perhaps you should push the corners of the mouth in a little. If you look at a real person, you'll notice that the corners are a little sunk in, towards the teeth.

All this said, I think it's a great model.

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/Mr. Stagger Lee

[oKKun]

Stagger Lee, I'm not sure you realize this but Jukka works for the same company you work for, why not just tell him face to face? I know I will

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/oKKun
[email protected]

[Mr. Stagger Lee]

I am aware of that, but since he can't be bothered to walk 10 meters to ask me what I think, I'll just say it here...


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/Mr. Stagger Lee

[This message has been edited by Mr. Stagger Lee (edited April 01, 2001).]

[BooMSticK]

which company are you swedes working for?
,Boom

[2car]

Well its called Digital illusions. www.dice.se
^_^

[Nadab]

DICE?!, never heard of it...

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-Nadab
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