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AKIRA_x · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 8:25 am

OK!!!..tried something new this time...TEXTURING!!..never REALLY tried that very much. So I thought I would try with some pictures of me I had. So I stared pasting and scaling..and readjusting my face to fit the model. VOILA:

Yes, I know the model is not 100% proportional..but I couldnt wait..had to try the textures.

AKIRA

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Whos ya dady!!

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Mr. Stagger Lee · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 9:20 am

I assume that you want it commented, since you posted it here, so here goes;

The forhead should be higher, the eyes should be in the middle of the head. That is a mistake people often make.
The eyes should also be a bit further apart, maybe a little lower and slightly larger. The root of the nose is also way too thin.
And finally, the mouth looks a little too wide.

Other than that, it looks promising.

[edit] Missed one thing. The root of the nose should be pulled out, try to make the line of the nose more vertical.

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/Mr. Stagger Lee

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AKIRA_x · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 10:42 am

Thank you, I will look into it..but I am really not lookin for the A4 format..I want character..so I want to keep some things.

AKIRA

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Whos ya dady!!

daffy · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 2:22 pm

The bump texture need some more tiling, the skin kinda looks like a lizzard at the moment. But if he has some sort of skin dissorder I guess it's ok!

Svanur · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 6:47 am

I saw some errors that could be fixed. My anatomy is based on Burne Hogarth's teaching so bear with me.

1. The width between the eyes is one eye in length. Seems to be correct but like Mr. Stagger said, the root is too thin. Should be wider.

2.The width of the head is 5 eyes.

3. The ends of the mouth should be in line with the middle of the eyes. Seems a bit wide, just like mr.Stagger said

The eyes should be in the middle of the face.
The cranium looks a bit weird too the curve seems a bit wrong, the cranium is a bit to large but if you would heighten the forehead it should fix itself.

well these are my 2 cents.

PS it looks good and with some adjustments it will look great. Add some hair and texture and he would be cool

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