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detonation2000 · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 6:02 pm

ok so this is it so far. This is the 4rth pic I have posted in these forums since I joined. three of these pics were in the last week. Im really enjoying this drawing thing. Ok so anyways im not sure if the highlights are bright enough and her skin seems a bit dull but im not sure. suggestions, comments?

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Loukus · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 7:14 pm

dobeedobedo

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Loukus · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 7:15 pm

AHAHAHAHAHAH!

This is so funny!

I have a 1024/768 resolution on and I see the top of the pic and think Oh this is cool, and then I scroll down and see the hands! hehe. That was a surprise. Anyway what you have here looks pretty cool, I can't wait to see the rest of it finished.

hmmm... maybe darker shading on areas not directly exposed to the candle light, on the face and such.

detonation2000 · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 9:40 pm

so im doing this pic ok I think but now im having issues with the eye. im not sure how to draw it. I want it open and looking down(at a book or at writting, not sure yet. The nose doesnt feel quite right either.

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As soon as your born you start dying,
so you might as well have a good time.
-Cake
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Awetopsy · Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 10:41 am

here's a little reference for you.. I drew the skull (sorta) in there for you because of the angle the head is on... and I noticed that the lips looked way to small (sorta looks like shes percing her lips or they're just really small) and thats what makes the nose look off.. the nose looks ok (there are alot of dif ways to draw the nose. anyways.. this was my 30 second over draw.. hope you dont mind.. :P

[edit] oh yeah and her jaw needs to be defined below her ear..

-awe

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detonation2000 · Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 1:47 pm

hey thats great. thanks for the info. I will get working on that right away.
anyone else?

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As soon as your born you start dying,
so you might as well have a good time.
-Cake
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mutok · Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 1:47 pm

hmmm... i think the solution to your eye problem is to move it down and to the left a bit. that should do it :^) i think that is the simplest solution (not to slight the other skillful crits)

detonation2000 · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 8:35 pm

Ok folks I need your help major. The reason why I am being so persistent with this image is because I think it is turning out damn good. The eye is my problem however. I just cant seem to get it right. This is the point were I need someone to draw a quick out line of where and how the eye should be. and maybe shadows or something. PLEASE, help me! I want the eyelid to be slightly clothed because the girl is looking down at a letter or book or sumthin.

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As soon as your born you start dying,
so you might as well have a good time.
-Cake
Vertigo Designs
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http://members.home.net/detonation2000

SoMK · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 9:13 pm

Apparently, it'snota real profile. Her headseems alittle tilted to her left.. So my so-so rough would be :

the green line being the middle line.. Maybe you should rework the neck a little.. ?

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