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Topic : "My first submission. Be kind, now =)" |
diggum junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Mar 2001 Posts: 3 Location: Seattle, WA
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 9:27 am |
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Started on this around 8pm last night and went to bed around 10:30. I'm painting a recent cover from Premiere magazine with Penelope Cruz. I have never done this sort of project before, so be kind, but please give me suggestions. MY background has mostly been concert flyers, cd cover design, stuff like that, so moving into more fine art is new territory for me.
thanks!
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neebhore member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2001 Posts: 330 Location: UK
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 11:24 am |
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Oh my, that's great so far. I love the lip, you've done that very well. I'd like to see it finished! |
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SushiMaster member
Member # Joined: 11 Jul 2000 Posts: 304 Location: Switzerland + UK
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 1:30 pm |
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Yeah, if you can make the lips this amazing you should be able to do something about the eyes :-)
Daniel |
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neebhore member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2001 Posts: 330 Location: UK
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 2:02 pm |
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I was gonna comment on the eyes, but i thought maybe you hadn't finished them Just need to make them look like they're reflecting light. |
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Hyperi0n member
Member # Joined: 01 Aug 2000 Posts: 96 Location: K-W,ON,Canada
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 3:00 pm |
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very nice,keep up the good work |
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edible snowman member
Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 6:56 pm |
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the reason the eyes look off is because the pupil and iris of her right eye is bigger than her left. also i think the eyelashes look more clumpy than that, especially with makeup on. but like everyone else said, the lips are cool. |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2001 12:04 am |
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wow.. good job so far.. I think the nose looks a little off... but thats probly just form the sketch.. cant wait to see it finished.
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diggum junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Mar 2001 Posts: 3 Location: Seattle, WA
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2001 12:59 am |
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Thanks. the lip turned out really well. the eyes I'm not thrilled about, though they're not horrible. She's a little too caucasian, still.
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