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diggum
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 9:27 am     Reply with quote
Started on this around 8pm last night and went to bed around 10:30. I'm painting a recent cover from Premiere magazine with Penelope Cruz. I have never done this sort of project before, so be kind, but please give me suggestions. MY background has mostly been concert flyers, cd cover design, stuff like that, so moving into more fine art is new territory for me.

thanks!

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 11:24 am     Reply with quote
Oh my, that's great so far. I love the lip, you've done that very well. I'd like to see it finished!
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 1:30 pm     Reply with quote
Yeah, if you can make the lips this amazing you should be able to do something about the eyes :-)

Daniel
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 2:02 pm     Reply with quote
I was gonna comment on the eyes, but i thought maybe you hadn't finished them Just need to make them look like they're reflecting light.
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 3:00 pm     Reply with quote
very nice,keep up the good work
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 6:56 pm     Reply with quote
the reason the eyes look off is because the pupil and iris of her right eye is bigger than her left. also i think the eyelashes look more clumpy than that, especially with makeup on. but like everyone else said, the lips are cool.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2001 12:04 am     Reply with quote
wow.. good job so far.. I think the nose looks a little off... but thats probly just form the sketch.. cant wait to see it finished.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2001 12:59 am     Reply with quote
Thanks. the lip turned out really well. the eyes I'm not thrilled about, though they're not horrible. She's a little too caucasian, still.
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