[DiXter]

I got the insperation for this pic wile playing "Clive Barkers Undying", Great game by the way. I know that the lightning is bit messed up right now.. the blue light from the left doesn't fall on the priest the way it should(I'm working on it..) But am i over doing it by paint some ruins or something in the back?



------------------
DiXter

[Frost]

It's looking good, but I think his pants are a little too bright and getting too much attention.

[neebhore]

I think it looks great so far, but i agree with ^

[Bibbe]

i agree too .. the pants are a little bright.
Is his right leg to thick? i'm not sure from the way he is standing.

[DiXter]

Ok.. thankx for the crits. I've done some changes, i hope you can notice them..


------------------
DiXter

[neebhore]

Darker trousers, and more blue light!
It looks better, but something i just noticed, your blue light source is coming from the upper left, yes? But on the cross dagger thing, it's coming from the upper right. Plus i think his hand at the front could be a bit bigger, but im just being a bitch now

[EDIT]-Im a f*n ijeet, i was looking at the old one regarding the light direction.

It loox cool dude.

[This message has been edited by neebhore (edited March 21, 2001).]

[Xadhoom]

Way cool, dude! Only crit is (sorry!) his trousers. I don't know, it just seems that they dont have enough form. Try giving them some kind of texture, or try to give them a more "rounded" shading. Right now they seem to be a big splotch of the same color with wrinkles (great wrinkles, by the way!).
Keep up the good work!

------------------
Xadhoom http://home14.inet.tele.dk/xadhoom

[This message has been edited by Xadhoom (edited March 22, 2001).]

[DiXter]

yes i see what you mean,
.. thankx for the advice..



------------------
DiXter